Daisuke's Zanpakuto.

Name: Ranmyaku(Chaos)

Visual Age: 20(actual age is 750)

Looks: A dark tan female elf with silver grayish hair color, with a red tribal tattoo on her lefr arm.
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Likes: To be alone, thinking to herself. talking to Daisuke and giving him advice.

Habits: To wonder around in her inner world, to be near Daisuke.

Personality: Ranmyaku is a very calm personailty and also likes to be alone. She only allows Daisuke to be around her and has
romantic feelings for him as well although she don't tells him.

Inner World: It is a ruin city that nature has over taken. There is a bridge connecting the city together with a river running in the
middle of it. There are some vines on some of the buldings, the sky is clouded.
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Connection to Master: They are partners who all ways look out for each other. There is also a small romance relationship going on.

Similarities: There both very calm, like to be alone, and also like to be with each other as well.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Type: Souba(basic form)

Subtype:

Camo: none

Looks: Is The Souba is a katana with two reinforced parallel blades, set a small distance apart from each other.
The design's intent is to trap an opponent's blade between them and disarm them.
It has black onyx stones and white diamonds embbeded in the hilt.
The right blade is white and the left side is black. The blades are also made up of a special materail that can repale element attacks at him
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~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Shikai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Release Phrase: Let there be chaos

Looks: He wears his old ninja gear that he wore while he was in the human world. Pretty much tight clothing that helps amps up
his speed and strength.
His Zanpaukto looks like two katana's with a chain in between them. He can connect the katana's together so they are a double sided
katana. The really nifty thing is the chain in between the katana's. Since the chain is made up of pure diamonds it is breakable but
shikai attacks won't break it. Three Bankai hits can break the chains.


Family:Chaos

Special Ability: The Twins of Yin&Yang
This is pretty much straight forward. Daisuke is able to make two copys of himself one is white, one dark. NOTE: THEY CAN HURT
YOU. Just because they are copys do not mean that can't hurt you. You still sustain the damage you took while the copies were
alive(don't matter if you're high ranking or not, it's the same for everyone.)
Techs:
Solar Flare: Pretty much as the name states, it's a massive ball of light about as big as a basketball and is as bright as a welding
torch which can cause people to be blind for a duration of six. It has a cooldown of six to recharge it.
Unholy Darkness: This attack is focus in the index finger. Daisuke makes a gun with his thumb and index finger. Then he pulls
back on his thumb and starts to charge up the attack. When the attack hits his opponet not only does it cause damage but can
also give the opponet a blind effect making them hard to see. If it hits someone in the heart or in between the eyes then that's were
the most damage is going to be. The blind effects have a duration of two and a cooldown of five.
Holy Shild: Pretty much a barrier that is made up of light. Has a 360 degree protection around his body.Ten Shaiki hits to the
shild will break it. A dark element attack can break it instanly. The duration is five and has a cooldown of ten.
Camo effect: This effect is just a camo effect that allows daisuke to bend the light or shadows/darkness(what ever you want to call it)
Now there is no effects for it but due to the unique nature of this camo effect it can only be used for light and dark. The light camo
effect takes effect when Daisuke bends the light around him to mask both spirutal pressure and his acutal body making it difucalt
to track him. The same is in effect for the dark camo, but the catch is this can used in dark places and not only can it mask his
spirutal pressure and his body, but he can pretty much mask everything that can give him away. Now should he attack the camo
effect is lifted. It has a duration of four and a cooldown of eight.


~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Bankai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Release Phrase: You think you seen power? I'll show you power, Chaos Relase.

Looks: Sheads his ninja gear and wears light weight clothing. His uniform shirt and jacket is half white and half black, and his pants
are black.
His Zanpaukto becomes a fusion katana with a small pendents hanging off the swords. One is a white ciricle and one is black.
Pretty much what this means is that he can merge the katanas into one blade or can spearate them to become two. When the
katana's are fuesed together the blade is half white, half black and the pendents become a full yin-yang circle.

Family: Chaos

Special Ability: The Forbidden Twins Mach 3(this is an upgraded verison of The Twins of Yin&Yang.) As with his Shikai, Daisuke
can summon two copys of himself but there's more upgrades for them. On top of having all their old abilites they also get a small
regeneration ability. It's not instant healing but in three posts they can be fully heal. Now how they have regeneration is the fact that
since most elements have there respective ways of healing example a water user can heal by submerging his/her body and water
or a fire user walking into a open flame and embracing the flames and allowing it to cover their bodies. As with the yin and yang
verison of Daisuke these copies have a diffrent way of getting their regneration. Since Yang is white it can recive it regneration
via a light source(the sun, a lamp, etc.) Since Yin is dark it can recive it's regeration threw dark places(a alleyway, the moon, etc)
Again you still sustain the damage you took while the copies are alive.

Techs:
Fusion: Pretty much this allows him to fuse his two katana's into one katana. The duration is ten and the cooldown is ten.
Supernova: A last resort move that only Daisuke can know. Channling all of his light&dark energy into one massive ball of energy
and then unleashing it on the battlefield and causing massive damage(again don't matter what rank you are it still affects
everyone the same.) The ball is roughly the size of a weather ballon. The explosion for supernova is enough to take out a small
district with in a big city. There is only one charge post for this and takes a cooldown of ten.
Chaos Shild: Is a shild that can protect Daisuke 360 degrees around his body.Takes about four bankai hits to break it.
It has a cooldown of eight and the duration is only five
Chaos Sphere: Is a status effect attack but due to this it lacks a powerful attack strength. It's still powerfull for anyone who
is weak but higher level people can be phased by it. there is a second ability that makes it a very good move.
It has a random effect in battle when it hits it's targert it can cause a sense of distortion in their body making them lose on of their most vaiablue assests.
The effect is random and can wager from loseing your sense of sight to making your sword arm unuesable and the effects last for
five. It has a cooldown of ten. The effects for Chaos Sphere is unique do to the fact that it targets body function areas like the arm,
eyes, leg, etc. Now the effects will take place if the sphere evern touches a part of your body, it does not have to be a big area for it
to take effect. If by example the sphere hits a target in the arm it will cause they arm to be paralized, or if it hits the leg it'll cause
them to have to fight on one leg. Now for the higer ups no broken bones or tendens will be snapped, that's only works on weaker
opponets.
Camo effect: This effect is just a camo effect that allows daisuke to bend the light or shadows/darkness(what ever you want to call it)
Now there is no effects for it but due to the unique nature of this camo effect it can only be used for light and dark. The light camo
effect takes effect when Daisuke bends the light around him to mask both spirutal pressure and his acutal body making it difucalt
to track him. The same is in effect for the dark camo, but the catch is this can used in dark places and not only can it mask his
spirutal pressure and his body, but he can pretty much mask everything that can give him away. Now should he attack the camo
effect is lifted. It has a duration of four and a cooldown of eight.

I'm going to have to ask you to go to the weapon customization topic and roll for your sealed form. A 6 inch sealed blade is too much. Because of the explanation given on larger swords, you will have to roll LOWER than a 10. IF you manage to do this, this you have to pick between a camo for your blade or the elongated sword. You cannot have both.

Your Bankai's special ability to touching on time. Time isn't allowed here. On top of that, Bankai doesn't physically change you (your white hair and eye, and black hair and eye).

Finally, your Shikai techs aren't techs...just a list of weapons. Likewise, the Shikai special ability isn't a special ability (unless you mean they are increased further) since Shikai naturally does that. If you are curious about techs or anything feel free to look at the accepted weapons =)

Needs these changes:

1) Your family is 3 different types. Illusions, light, and dark. You cannot have three.

2) All your techs needs durations and cooldowns.

3) You can not have three different Shikai forms just for the sake of it. If you're going to have different forms, you need different techs for each of them.

4) Your sealed can be ONE Souba. Because of it's unique nature, it will count as a dual wield.

Make these changes and we can go from there.

Okay almost done =) All your techs need to lose the time. Durations and cooldowns are posts.

Supernova cannot be the size of the moon. If it was the size of the moon, you haven't killed the battle field. You've destroyed yourself, as well as an overly large portion of the world you're on. Supernova can cause mass destruction, don't get me wrong. But not celestial body size.

For Chaos shield, rather than say 20 hits, just state how much it would take to break it. Only because Bankai is 5 times stronger than Shikai. So if it takes 20 Shiaki hits, it would take 4 bankai hits. So instead, say what could break it, and what can't break it.

Moves cannot be unavoidable. So you have to edit that out of Chaos Sphere.

1) Describe your sword in Shikai and Bankai

2) Describe Holy Flare and Unholy Flare in more detail. Right now it is kind of confusing.

3) Give an estimate of how large the explosion is for Supernova. Depending on the damage done, the charge time for it may have to be more.

Daisuke wrote:Chaos Shild: Is a shild that can protect Daisuke 360 degrees around his body.Takes about twenty shaiki hits to break the shild
and four bankai hits to break it. It has a cooldown time of five.

It cannot be 20 Shikai AND 4 bankai. One or the other, and because it's endurance is so high, remove the 360 degrees. Or you can keep the 360 degrees and make it less durable. The same goes for the shikai version.

5) You cannot have the same tech just with a different name. There has to be some kind of difference between them. Most of all your techs are the same thing, just rather than using light they use dark. Please either get rid of them, or find a way to make them different from each other.

Anything that has a "can be used x times and then has a cooldown of x" has to go. You can only use an attack once before it's duration takes effect.

Chaos shield cannot last until it is broken, it has to have an actual duration on it. Holy shield also needs a duration on it.

Up the cooldown on the Fusion to 10, lower the cooldown on Supernova to 10 and a charge post of 1, and lower the duration of the status effects to at least 5.

Daisuke wrote:Since the chain is made up of pure diamonds it is unbreakable so it can't be seperated.

Diamond can be broken. The chain is part of your zanpakuto, and as such it can be broken if the conditions are correct just like any zanpakuto.

Daisuke wrote: It's not instant healing but in twenty minuets time they can be fully heal.

Why can they heal? Explain that, and if you can then make it 5 posts not twenty minuets.

Reduce both shield durations (Chaos Shield and Holy Shield) to 5, and increase the duration to 5 for Holy Shield and8 for Chaos Shield.

The two shikai attacks Solar flare and unholy darkness, reduce the blinding effect to 2 for unholy darkness, and 3 for Solar flare and increase the cooldown of solar flare to 6.

Explain in detail the effects of Chaos Sphere. State what effects it produces.

when you say increase do you mwan increase my cooldown or what cause i'm a little lost.

Increase the duration of Holy Shield to 5
Increase the duration of Chaos Shield to 8
Increase the cooldown for Solar Flare to 6

Camo needs a 4 duration and an 8 cooldown, on top of that if you attack, what you are covering (save yourself) is uncovered. I know what I said in the chatbox was different, but you amped it up so it was necessary.

Chaos Sphere: Specifically state what effects they may undergo.

Switch the duration and cooldown of Chaos shield. I apologize, I got my numbers mixed up.

approved.