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    Uvaras Resurrecion

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    Post by Uvaras Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:36 am

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Name: [Olvido] Oblivion

    Type: Katana

    Looks: Takes the form of a standard sized katana with a black handle and sheath.

    Sub-type: N/A

    Camo: N/A

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Resurreccion~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Release Phrase: "Ensure"

    Representation: Dark Angel

    Aspect of Death: Nihilism

    Family: Darkness

    Looks: The Cloak Image -
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    Uvaras gains a long cloak that covers his entire body and there's a hood that allows nobody to be able to see his face and gains dark wings also a ring on his right hand finger ring. His mask spreads and made half of his face with hollow mask.

    Special Ability: Input reiatsu to only Two Scythes and it will twirl around Uvaras and protects Uvaras from harm. The Scythes are much more powerful than he normally uses. [Only Defend]

    Duration: After posting 3, Cooldown: After posting 5

    Scythes Image -
    Spoiler:

    Techs:

    Name: Scythes
    Requirement: None
    Type: Offense
    Description: Summon one or two Scythes which were shown in the Resurrection Appearance.

    Duration: 1 Post , Cooldown - After posting 1 , - Can only summon 10 Scythes

    Name: Crescent Slash
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Description: When Uvaras throws two two Scythes, it will kept on twirling and turns into two Crescent slashes which looks like a "X". If it goes much further than medium range then once it hits the enemy, it will explode. [If enemy is too near, he only throws normal Scythes.

    Duration: 1 Post , Cooldown - After posting 2

    Name: Shinjin
    Requirement: None
    Type: Traps
    Description: Placing dark powers under the ground by putting his hands onto the ground's surface, reiatsu willgo under the ground and makes a circular dark power and if anyone reached its territory which is where the power is placed, it will explode.

    Duration: 4 Post , Cooldown - After posting 2

    Name: Akutenshi
    Requirement: None
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Concentrate dark powers to my hand then shoot it like a beam. "Not like Cero well similar but different damage and looks" There would also be dark power surrounding the beam if anyone touches it, he get hurt. Once the dark beam is used, Akutenshi would be used up and needed to wait for another 2 turns.

    Duration: 1 Post , Cooldown - After posting 5

    Name: Sword's Grave
    Requirement: Scythe
    Type: Offensive
    Description: The Scythe blades hit the ground and many swords will keep appearing out from two side for a "/" [Erm...it was suppose to go through each other] it will stop once it reaches the opponent

    Duration: 1 Post , Cooldown - After posting 2

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Segunda Etapa~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Release Phrase: "Oblivate"

    Looks: Dark powers circled around him and looks as if he was being burned by the dark powers. Gaining an extra hollow helmet but it's only half and at the same side of where half of his half mask appeared.

    Special Ability: The Crescent Slashes can follow the enemy like a homing missle, the further it travels means it will cause an explosion once it lands or hits anything. So basically if someone dodges it, it would travel a longer distance to hit the enemy so instead of short or medium range, it would become a long range so it causes explosion. If it just hits then it is normal.

    Name: N/A
    Requirement: N/A
    Type: Supplementary [Passive]
    Description: Increases the power of the abilities from the 1st resurrecion.

    Name: Dark Tunnel
    Requirement: N/A
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Lifts up his hand and a circular dark tunnel (Like tornado with enemy things at the middle) will come out like tornado which will keep sucking him in and many dark spheres attacks him once he reached inside.[Doesn't explode or anything just hurts them, might die well depends]

    Duration: 2 Post or the victim escapes , Cooldown - After posting 4

    Techs: Name: 13 Blades
    Requirement: None
    Type: Offensive / Defensive
    Description: Creating 13 powerful sword shaped shield and it can be sent to kill an opponent or defend Uvaras. This uses a lot of reiatsu as this is his strongest ability and the speed when it attacks are swift and controlled by Uvaras's mind.

    Duration: After posting 5 , Cooldown - After posting 7


    Last edited by Uvaras on Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:33 pm; edited 8 times in total
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    Post by Valintine Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:42 am

    Couple things here.

    1) Techs need cooldowns and durations.

    2) Your sealed form looks is the looks of the blade not yourself.

    3) Needs a family type.

    4) Resurrecion requires physical change. These changes include some mask restoration. The wings are okay, just add in what part of your mask is restored.

    5) You have to roll to have a camo. To do that go here: https://bleachbc.rpg-board.net/pending-weapon-application-f13/weapon-customization-t12.htm

    6) Your special ability is the special ability of the res. High Speed Regeneration is your innate ability which cares over into your released form. Please use a different special ability.
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    Post by Uvaras Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:10 pm

    Edited.
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    Post by Valintine Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:54 pm

    Few more things:

    1) Within your resurrection appearance state and describe what your weapon is (if you have one)

    2) Name of the resurrection must be in spanish.

    3) If the family is darkness then the techs must somehow be related to darkness (also the techs need durations not just N/A. Even if it is only for that one post)

    4) Can you give more detail on your special ability?
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    Post by Uvaras Sun Jul 18, 2010 2:47 pm

    Er, yeah edited. It shows darkness, the Scythes represent the Reaper.
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    Post by Valintine Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:00 pm

    Duration means how long it lasts. That's what you have to state. If you need examples you can look at other people's weapons if you need help =)
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    Post by Uvaras Sun Jul 18, 2010 10:34 pm

    Done.
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