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    Aoineko

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    Post by Kimiko Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:49 pm

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~SPIRIT~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Name: Aoineko(blue cat)

    Visual Age: 8
    Looks: A young girl with long light blue hair that goes down her back, light blue cat ears and tail, Tassels attacked to long strings hang from her ears. Her bangs are parted in the middle, showing her forehead a little. She wears a small blue gothic-style bow on the top of her head. Her top is a ruffled on her neck and had long sleeves that cover her hands. Her skirt is made out of mist and appears to be a part of the ocean around her. She has blue cat eyes and a small nose. Picture drawn by me.

    Likes: Water, tassels, storms

    Habits: licking the back of her hand, playing with tassel earrings

    Personality: shy, kind, kid-like

    Inner World: A vast beach, the ocean peaks onto the sand in small, graceful waves. Aoineko’s skirt seems to be flowing out of the water. There is a large lighthouse on the sand. Many palm trees line the beach. Shells cover the coast in many colors, shapes and forms. It is always sunset with the sun reflecting off the water. A large ship can be seen on the distance. A small island only big enough for Kimiko to lay down on during her visits is positioned right in front of Aoineko

    Connection to Master: Kimiko is like a mother figure to Aoineko. Kimiko spends much time with Aoineko and treats her like her own daughter.

    Similarities: Shyness, kind, long light blue hair
    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Sealed~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Type: Katana

    Subtype: n/a

    Camo: -n/a

    Looks: The hilt is a light blue color with a thin black string wrapped around it. The string hangs down about six inches and ends in two light blue tassels. The silver guard is kinda in the shape of a four leaf clover with less indention. There are four closed eyes with eyelashes on each “leaf”. The blade is about four feet long and the hilt is about a foot long. The blade is a light blue on the sharp side and a regular blue on the dull side.

    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Shikai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Release Phrase: Freeze Kasumi Aoineko(Mist Blue Cat)

    Looks: The hilt and guard remain the same while the blade is now jagged, two feet long and made of ice. The mist no longer circles around the hilt, but has now moves around the blade. The eyes on the guard are now open revealing blue cat eyes with dark eyelashes
    Family: Mist/Ice

    Special Ability: Shrouding Mist: The mist moves from around the blade and covers a vast area in a thick fog, covering herself and her allies for a quick getaway.


    Techs:
    Freezing Mist: A single target is incircled by a thin layer of mist that stays around them until it freezes onto the victim's body. After each post, it gets a little thicker limiting the target's vision. After 4 posts, the mist turns comepletely into ice around the victim's body. The mist/ice is disapated by almost any major heat sorce.

    Mist Duration: 4 posts
    Ice Duration: 2 posts
    Cooldown: 8 posts



    ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~Bankai~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
    Release Phrase: Bankai Three Eyes Aoineko

    Looks: Cat ears and a tail appear on the user made out of mist. Three closed eyes appear over their head floating in the sky. These eyes open as she either takes damage or receives it. The left eye opens first, then the right eye, then finally, the middle eye. When open, the eyes look like cat eyes with dark eyelashes. The hilt remains the same and the guard keeps the same shape, but where the eyes were, now there are blur ellipse shaped jewels. The blade now appears solid, but made of mist. Two stray pieces of mist float beside the blade
    Family: Mist

    Special Ability: Piercing Glare: When the eyes are opened, Kimiko can release this ability.

    Techs



    Last edited by Kimiko_Ryuunosuke on Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:57 am; edited 8 times in total
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    Post by Kimiko Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:21 am

    Can I go ahead and get this approved and add the bankai's special ability when I figure it out?
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    Post by Valintine Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:49 am

    Kimiko_Ryuunosuke wrote:A soft mist encircles the hilt and Kimiko’s lower arm when is use.

    Edit this out.

    Make a cooldown and duration for the mist.
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    Post by Kimiko Tue Jul 27, 2010 12:35 pm

    Edited.
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    Post by Valintine Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:31 pm

    Mist still doesn't have a duration.

    Also, your special ability doesn't have anything to do with mist or ice. Please change it so that your special ability relates to your family, or vice versa.
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    Post by Kimiko Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:26 pm

    I switched the Ability and the technique and added a duration.
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    Post by Valintine Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:47 pm

    The tech doesn't relate to the family still. Your entire zanpakuto has to relate to your selected family.
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    Post by Kimiko Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:17 am

    edited
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    Post by Valintine Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:27 am

    Kimiko_Ryuunosuke wrote:This is your family. Meaning the element of the zanpakutoFamily: Mist/Ice

    This matches your family because it is mist.Special Ability: Shrouding Mist: The mist moves from around the blade and covers a vast area in a thick fog, covering herself and her allies for a quick getaway.

    Duration: 5 posts
    Cooldown: 10 posts


    Techs:
    This DOES NOT match your family as it has to do with POISON not ice or mist. So it has to be changed.Reveal poison: The eyes on her guard release a thin mist that allows her to see poison on/in an object/body by changing color on a selected target.

    Please fix your zan as requested.
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    Post by Valintine Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:39 am

    Shrouding mist doesn't need a cooldown or duration as it is a special ability.

    Freezing mist, give more detail on it. Can you control it? Does it just sit there? How long does it take to freeze a person in it?
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    Post by Kimiko Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:48 am

    Edited, hopefully for the last time...
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    Post by Valintine Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:54 am

    If the mist lasts for 6 posts how long does it take to totally freeze the target? And how long until the freeze status ends?
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    Post by Kimiko Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:57 am

    Does that clearify?
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    Post by Valintine Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:08 am

    Approved.

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